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Competition Showcase – The Tortoiseshell Comb by Malcolm Welshman

This section of the website showcases stories by Writing Magazine competition runners-up.

The Tortoiseshell Comb, by Malcolm Welshman, Billinghurst, West Sussex, was runner-up in the WM Summer Ghost Story competition.

The winning story, Lost At Sea, Christine Sutton, features in the April issue of Writing Magazine.

The judging comments are on the last page
Posted: 10 March 2006
Previous Showcase stories: Collision, Fran Tracey

Now retired as a vet, Malcolm Welshman was the vet for My Weekly for fifteen years and had two books on children’s pets published by Foulshams. Over the last year he has had fourteen features and short stories accepted by a range of national magazines including The Lady, Yours, Best of Britain, Your Cat and People's Friend. He is currently contributing a regular anecdotal feature page to Cat World.

The Tortoiseshell Comb

by

Malcolm D Welshman

She found my wife’s comb on a shelf of bric-a-brac in a charity shop. Little did she realise then how much it was going to change her life.
‘Don’t tell me, Luce, you’ve found a priceless treasure,’ chuckled Paul, coming over with a cluster of paperbacks he’d chosen.
‘No…no…just this. Rather sweet isn’t it?’ She held up the comb for her husband to see. It was little more than six inches long, tortoiseshell with a shaped handle at one end, inlaid with a delicate tracery of white lilies in mother-of-pearl. I knew that the feel of the comb in her palm would be soothing, reassuring, helping to push back the dark shadows that still haunted her mind.
Those shadows were the reason they were there on Exmoor. On holiday. The rented cottage Paul’s idea.
‘Might help to buck you up,’ he’d said, his face screwed up with concern as he searched hers for signs of the old Lucy, his wife with a passion for life, his wife with a wicked sense of humour;

both blacked out these past few months. It had been the same with my wife.
Lucy decided to buy the comb.
‘Might as well have this too,’ said Paul stretching past her to lift down a framed photo propped on the top shelf. ‘See…it matches.’ The photo depicted our wedding day, standing in the porch of a church. The frame, like the comb, was tortoiseshell, each corner inlaid with lilies identical to those on the comb’s handle.
Over lunch in a nearby tea room, Lucy couldn’t resist taking another peek at her purchases. My wife’s comb was perfect, no teeth missing; but the support on the frame’s backing was loose. Something I’d never got round to fixing.
‘Nothing that can’t be put right,’ declared Paul.
Lucy studied our photograph. Faded black and white. We were standing in stilted pose, arms linked. My wife slight, in Edwardian lace, fair hair piled on her head, shy smile, her hands clutching a posy of lilies. Me tall, thick set, awkward in buttoned charcoal suit, high collar, bowler hat under one arm, dark curly hair, mutton-chop whiskers.
That night, back at the cottage, with our photo propped up against the dressing table mirror, the comb lying next to it, Lucy slipped into a far calmer sleep than she had done for weeks; lulled


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