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Competition Showcase – Dr Murdo's Walking Stick by Sara Lee

‘Someone was trying to break into my wardrobe.’ Said Jack, showing him the damage. The manager was puzzled: ‘But why would anyone want to break in here?’
Jack remembered the walking stick, but on unlocking the wardrobe door he was relieved to find it still there. ‘And how on earth did they get away?’ mused the manager. ‘No one passed me.’
Jack went to the window. But it was securely fastened. Then he spotted the flowers: fresh and bright only a few hours ago, they were now just brown wilted stalks.
‘Shall I fetch the police, do you think?’ asked the manager. But they both agreed that, as nothing was missing, there seemed little point.
Later the next morning Jack returned to Curiosities, but he found the door locked and a sign ‘gone to sale’ hanging in the window. The country house sale at Apley Manor, he assumed.
He found the proprietor there, milling about with other dealers, catalogue in hand. He seemed unconcerned to see Jack, but when he saw he had the walking stick with him he paled and looked afraid.

‘You didn’t get this at any sale,’ cried Jack, roughly taking him to one side. ‘You stole it from someone who is now following me around trying to get it back.’
The man sighed: ‘You’re right. I did steal it. But not in the way you think. I’ve lived all my life in Apley and I have often heard the legend of Doctor Murdo’s fabulous walking stick, and how it was said to have been fashioned for him by the devil himself. But, of course, I never believed it. Then one day I chanced upon a painting of the good doctor, walking stick in hand. I was mesmerised, just as you were, by its ghastly beauty, and I vowed to find it. Indeed, the pursuit of it became an obsession. I knew it had been buried with him in an unmarked grave, which was somewhere in an unhallowed part of the churchyard. It took me years, but by piecing together clues from the various legends, I finally managed to locate the exact spot. Digging there late one night, I found a coffin, and on forcing it open there, in Murdo’s bony claw of a hand, was the walking stick – as beautiful as when it was first made. It was difficult to prise it from his grasp, strong even in death. But the moment I did, the skeleton fell to dust.


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