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Competition Showcase – FATE of an IDOL by Shaun Avery

This section of the website showcases stories by Writing Magazine competition runners-up.

The Mozart 250th anniversary was marked with a competition in which entrants were invited to write a short story about a thoroughly modern Mozart. The runner-up was Shaun Avery with his Fate of an Idol

The judging comments are on the last page
Posted: 4 October 2006
Previous Showcase stories:
A New Beginning, Annette Linstead
Ruby Cell, Richard Fox
No Angel
, Christine Sutton
Greater Love
, Dawn Bush
Collision
, Fran Tracey
The Tortoiseshell Comb, Malcolm Welshman
Dr Murdo's Walking Stick, by Sara Lee

Shaun Avery is 24, and his biggest writing influences are Ed Mcbain, Richard Laymon and the British comic 2000ad. He started publishing online in 2001, and slowly built up his confidence enough to be published three times in a local newspaper with a vast circulation, which he considers a high personal achievement of his life to this date. He is currently in full time employment, but when he does get a quiet moment, he is working on three different books, two of the horror variety and one modern day romantic comedy with a twist, and he hopes to see them finished and accepted for publication by the end of the year.

Fate of an Idol

by

Shaun Avery

‘And the winner of Class Idol 2006 is . . .’
The silence started off short and sweet, but as interminable moments passed by, Mozart – or ‘Clammy Ammy’ as the media had dubbed him, due to his habit of sweating profusely whilst bashing out a tune – began to wonder if the hostess hadn’t suffered some kind of seizure, one that left her standing whilst at the same time robbing her of her ability to speak. Dragging his eyes away from her, he looked to his mentor Robert, who gave an almost imperceptible nod – which was the only encouragement Mozart needed.
‘Wolfgang!’
He didn’t believe it at first; he’d thought the competition miles ahead of him. But the proof was in the pudding, and the pudding’s ingredients seemed to be the lights that framed him and the applause that now surrounded him. It was almost enough to make him feel lost – a sign of things to come.
He was pushed forward to speak to the hostess, who asked him, ‘Wolfgang, are you surprised?’

‘Well, yes. I mean, I’m . . .they’re all quality acts. I never expected this would happen, not ever.’
Suddenly feeling guilty, he looked back at the runners-up, expecting to see jealousy and hate and knowing that he would just crumble inside if he did. But the good thing about a reality talent show like Class Idol was the level of camaraderie amongst the participants, the sportsmanship they displayed, and as such, all he saw was pleased faces – although, he had to admit, probably none as thrilled as his own.
He’d have stood there for hours, days, even, a rabbit caught in the headlights of his own glory and success, if Robert hadn’t cut across the melee and escorted him backstage. ‘Come on, star,’ he said to Mozart, and then to the audience said, ‘no more questions! At least, not yet.’
The funny thing was, Mozart wasn’t a fame seeker at all; he was in this solely to make music, that was his calling, and auditioning for and then appearing on a show like Class Idol had only been a way to advance that. And yet here he was taking part in a press conference like some sort of celebrity. Madness. If his head had been screwed on properly, he’d have seen it as a portent of bad things to come.
‘So, Wolfie . . .can we call you Wolfie?’


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